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first date pg1 by limey404 first date pg1 by limey404
full view peeps.


yup, it's back up. except this time, the background in the first panel is alll ala limey. haha, i just took that friggin house and painted right over the sucker, turning it into... the exact same house! except this time i made it. if you don't believe me, check the matching sceencap. trust me, i made this mo fo. and yes it was a mo fo to make. 8D

i know i said in my journal that "there was no way in hell" i would do exactly what i just did (lulz) a) I didn't want pg 1 to stay down forever and b) i didn't want a blank bg. it wasn't so bad making it. and you know, there are always going to be people out there with giant sticks up their asses. all you have to do is laugh and move on!

so here's pg 1 all over again... now i'll be able to work on pg 6. i've been pretty busy lately (and sorta kinda depressed...moving on) which is why 6 has been delay. but it's all good, i'll work on it tomorrow. : )

this one's for all the cool people out there!

and on to page 2!>> [link]

back to the cover: [link]
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:iconginaloulou:
GinaLouLou Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015
I love this! Definitely seems ATLA realistic. Follow ups?
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EphemeraLuna Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
Alright, I've read the other half of the story on youtube (despite the little issues with it that I pointed out in another comment, because I just didn't want to wait <^_^) and I wasn't disappointed at all. It was kind of cliché in the sense that the basic idea has been done before a lot, but that on itself is not a bad thing at all, especially in this case, for you used that idea in a way that was very fitting and kept it really interesting. I didn't even see the little "twist" coming at the end despite how cliché it is and that says a lot already. ^^

And the whole "outing"/"date" thing too. It's a simple thing, but it made me laugh still partly just because it's fun and also because I could, again, so see that happen in the real show. Not just that, the whole thing. 

I've already said that a couple of times already, but that's because it's a really influential point to me. There are so many fanfics I've stopped reading just because people very often cannot portray these characters very well. They try, but don't quite get there, there's often something off about them still. But here, there was none of that. The characters are how they're supposed to be, the whole thing is nothing fancy, just a cute little teenage love story, adorably touching like the real show is. I love ATLA, so of course, the closer you get to making me believe your art is cannon, the more I love your art. Beautiful job. :)


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EphemeraLuna Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
I've browsed through your gallery and noticed that you stopped colouring these pages halfway through... Now I'm hesitating to start reading this comic because it looks so beautiful I fear I might get really drawn in and then be really bothered to go back to colorless, more sketchy drawings... 

Ahh, I'll read anyway, it looks too good not too, but do you plan on coloring in the rest? Do you also plan on making other ATLA comics?

I also wanted to point out that the drawing style is so close to the original show, it almost looks like it's an official release. You've definitely got talent, I love it. :)
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shadoefax Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow, ur drawings really resemble the characters and style as they appear in teh animation, AWESOME JOB
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:iconsonicdplozlove:
SonicDPLozLove Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sokka, don't you know it's rude to look through other people's mail!
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:iconnarutoninetailsfury:
NarutoNineTailsFury Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nosey Sokka lol :no:
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:iconryuujinwolf:
RyuujinWolf Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Student Writer
*gasp* Sokka!
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:iconyuki-chan112093:
Yuki-chan112093 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Student Writer
:XD: Sokka, opening someone else's mail is illegal!
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:icondimsumbum:
dimsumbum Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011
sokka's hot in basingse clothes. :3
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:iconwaterbender126:
waterbender126 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010
Sokka's an idiot,completely.
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:iconcloverdeer:
Cloverdeer Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010  Student General Artist
pft! XD XD
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psychic-pixie17 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010
typical. someone says "Avatar's eyes only," and he reads it anyway. see, there's a lesson we can all learn from this: NEVER, and I mean NEVER, give a message that's for Aang to Sokka, because he'll read it even if you tell him not to.
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:iconpietroigor:
Pietroigor Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
Obiously, Sokka do what Sokka should do...
:D
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DeMann6654 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2010  Professional Writer
But I think he looks great in the bottom-left frame (forgot to mention that.)

-D
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DeMann6654 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2010  Professional Writer
Like I said on the cover, I love the idea!

Just an honest critique of this first page, though, on some things that I personally feel would improve it.

I think it would be funny to have Sokka doing something goofy when he hears the knock at the door. Maybe working on one of his goofy paintings, surrounded by a pile of crumpled papers?

Also I feel that he doesn't react naturally when he receives the note. My book 3 won't arrive in the mail for another 2 days, but I think Sokka tends to react very seriously whenever he gets some sort of "official" task. Just my thoughts on that.

I think his "shifty eyes" look kindov' awkward; they are kind of off and he doens't look "shifty." He kindov' looks like he has a lazy eye 0_o

Anyway, just some thoughts on the first page. Like I said, I really like your idea and I plan to read the whole (or as much as you've done) thing!

-D
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AmbrMerlinus Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009
Sokka! Don't you know that's a felony? I'm ashamed of you!
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:iconciupakabra:
Ciupakabra Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009
omg sokka looks soo cool
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:iconayalis:
Ayalis Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2009
Dude, these are excellent! I totally thought these were actual, official comics for a moment! Keep up the good work! 10/10
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Cnidarian-Futility Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2009
Cute, but there goes all of my street cred. Retroactively.
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Gosen406 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Huzzah for getting around the MAN!! XDDDD Yay for it being back up

o___O Sorry for sounding uninformed but did some stupid person report you because they were lame?
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limey404 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
haha that's exactly what happened XD but it's all good now!

Thanks for all the lovvvvvely comments! :glomp: :glomp: :glomp:
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Gosen406 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! XD Talk about a lame-o who has nothing else to do with their time. Atleast you mentioned it wasnt yours. Its not like you were taking credit

Buuuut all is well now so yay!! =D

Awwww, you deserve all those lovely comments! :hug: :glomp:

So, has artblock plagued you? XD Artblock is so annoying
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Omnipotrent Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009
LOL! *OPEN!*
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:iconrin-89:
Rin-89 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009
That's just like Sokka! HA HA HA! Nice.
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:iconalienldr1:
Alienldr1 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol Well at least you got Sokka's character down. :XD: Good work.
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Zutara-Forever-897 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
of course sokka would do something like that lol =D
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:iconpreying-mantis:
Preying-Mantis Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well that looks pretty darn awesome if i do say so myself :D
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ahhhhhhhhitscoming Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009
:omfg: you did it!! haha take that all you people taking down the art! XD
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:iconmeko13:
meko13 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
sokka is such a snoop :lol:
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:iconneosun7:
Neosun7 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
Glad it's back!
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:iconayuffers:
ayuffers Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
Zuko: Welcome back.
Aang: Good to be back.
Me: *nosebleed*

Seriously, though, good to see it again.
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:iconangelkate:
AngelKate Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
Wow! You did a great job with painting that =O

*kicks the jerk who reported it*
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skittles713 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
whhhooooaaa.....nice painting job:omg:, yes it is a bitch to do a background but it's alllll worth it in the endXD
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PhantomGoddess94 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
in yo' face, DA! XD
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SeleneTheWerewolf Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
Great work. Looks awesome. Sokka, you're very naughty.
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:icononelilmonkey654:
onelilmonkey654 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well it looks awesome to me :D
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:iconfirelord-iroh:
Firelord-Iroh Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
Glad to have it back! I'm actually seeing it for the first time and its hilarious :D
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SlayerIncarnate Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
Nicely done!!
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:iconravat:
RavaT Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
Sokka!

For the Avatar's eyes only.... Suuure he would do that.

P.S. Love your style.
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EvilCopepod Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
Yay! You got it back up!
8DD
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:iconsailortenchi:
SailorTenchi Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
Well, at least it's up again. And that's awesome. *faves*
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:iconbanango:
banango Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
Haha. Looks WAY better this way anyways, Limey. x3
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:iconcantahari:
Cantahari Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
Looks aaaaaaaaawesome Limey! <3

Silly DA, but do you know what?, it's looks waaaaaaay better now!
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Aryck1095 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009   Digital Artist
Glad to have this page back. Dumb self-appointed art police can go jump off a bridge. Stilll as great as always, looking forward to the next page!
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Spootay Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist
LOL I love the fact that you got so determined to have this up, that you went against everything you said you wouldn't do.

DEDICATION!

Sucks you lost all those comments though. Oh well, we all know people were excited for this comic to get started.
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:iconhadoolket:
hadoolket Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
本則を無視してる、お金があるよ!
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Creagan-an-Fhithich Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
I've had problems with having screenshots taken down too... Granted, I was dubbing them, as upposed to what you did... But it's still annoying.
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swan-swan Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
Wonderful. =D Good to see this one again--hopefully, it'll stay up this time. Nice job.
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flamehead23a Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
awesome. I didn't mind the screenshot usage too much, but it's good to know you care enough to change it. =)
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tahnee503 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
yay...xDDD it looks better this way btw
lol xP
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